A humorous but compelling story about an effort to promote world-wide goodwill and the understanding of others by the selection of fourteen-year-old students to be injected with someone else's genetic code, to step away from I’ness by experiencing, in essence becoming, in their minds, someone else.

In one particular school, extreme reactions to the genetic injections of each other are immediate as emotional breakdowns with impulsive outbursts. As order collapses, and the class fractures into groups and scatters, one girl is targeted by the others. Still, as she is the only link to containment, she sets out to find herself.

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Excerpt

Chapter One

In Walmart, when I was five years old, I pleaded with my mom for a glittery Cinderella dress. She kept walking down the aisle of the store saying, “Oh darling, what do you want that for? You’d just play in it in the dirt and, anyway, you have the body of a square, defensive football player. You aren’t tall, darling, and you have no waist. You poor thing; you’ve got your father’s genes.” 

The only reason that I wanted that dress was because I was jealous in kindergarten of two girls who got to be the Indian princesses in the school play. My casting? Rag-time Joe who is, according to the song, ‘high falutin’, rootin’-tootin’, a son of a gun from Arizona.’ Don’t get me wrong, it’s a blast at five to be a rootin’-tootin’ son-of-a-gun, but I saw early on that princesses have the good times rolling.

It took me a long time to learn that you may not grow tall, and your nose doesn’t get any smaller because you really, really want it to; that long eyelashes are genetic, and mascara doesn’t really make them longer.

It was my genes, my units of heredity, my characteristics that made my mother and the kindergarten teacher see me not as a pretty Indian lass, but with a six-shooter. Let me tell you, being Ragtime Joe has disadvantaged me. My mother and father combo, I call it gene cocktail.

Okay, I’m not a designer shoe or a home-run hitter or in any way suaaave and genteeeel. I get “B’s” and “C’s.” I have short legs and square shoulders and a booming voice. I say what I think and can’t filter, because truth seems to be way too important to me.  

Being so disadvantaged, at school I have been called Butt Monkey as in the butt of the joke, the girl in the red shirt, the stupid sidekick. I actually respond to the moniker Elmur—thanks to Kirsten, who, in middle school, used to shorten names—“L” for Laura and then “Mur,” Murphy, my last name, equals “Elmur.” Elmur Fudd. My stepdad once called me The Schnauzer, which made me barking mad. Laura, what my mother named me at birth, does not sound like the name of a defensive-end, stubborn-terrier kind of person. She hoped for prettier.

My mom divorced my defensive-line dad and remarried her tall, graceful prince and had two princess daughters and a prince junior. One dull day, I permanently dropped myself off at Gran’s. I was too stocky for the new family, and I knew it. Good on Gran that she warmed to my arrival. She loves football and dogs.

That’s why I can’t wait. May fifth...Injection Day.

Stepping Away from “I”-ness.

That’s what that day is officially called in hotspots all over the world. It will begin in the morning. Then every ninth grader, from randomly selected test schools, will be given a sort of “vaccination” of someone else’s genes. Someone else’s genetic code. What it’s like to be someone else. Like being a real-life avatar.

Only we don’t get to choose.

They tell us we might have a little tenderness in the injection area, and maybe a little dizziness, but like our childhood shots for measles and mumps, we’ll all be fine.

Gran says, “Vaccinations my ass—more like allergy injections, sending something into the blood that can kill you; that you’re allergic to. Mark my words, girl, there’ll be trouble. Some people are anaphylactic towards each other.”

I don’t care. I want to know Stella Constance Miller’s first, second, and third thoughts every morning, and her last thought at bedtime. I want to be greeted when I walk into the gym. I want to stroll in the hallways as a group. I want to have social skills and have people to listen to me when I talk—like they do her. Either that or I want to be anyone who is a…graceful, saved-by-the-hero, pretty, for crying out loud, Indian princess.

“She isn’t pretty at all,” I say to my friend, Andrew Holtus. “But that doesn’t seem to matter. Why doesn’t it matter? That’s why I want her.”

Across from me, in the living-room of the two-bedroom green ranch house I share with Gran, I cannot actually see Andrew roll his eyes behind his reality goggles, but I know he is. We’ve been friends since pre-school. I always played with the boys, and he liked to be with the girls. Anyway, he’s tired of my princess hang-up. Once he asked me why I wanted to be someone else.

Friends. People who actually call and ask if I can come over.

“She has good hair. Guys like her long, black, straight hair. I saw her giving Sam Smith a quickie shoulder massage yesterday before the algebra teacher came into the classroom. A shoulder massage, pfffttt.”

I miss a demon kill and Andrew is run through. He punches my upper arm. Both of us whip off our goggles.

“The shot isn’t going to give you long black hair.”

“It will make me think that my short, mousey hair is superior. I won’t be calling it short, mousey hair.”

He collapses onto Gran’s tribal red, green, and beige itchy sofa and throws popcorn into his mouth while we wait for a reset.

I drop next to him and grab a handful and spill kernels onto the dark brown carpet. We both throw our feet onto the coffee table. Its surface has enough water rings to be a design. No figurines, or vases, or coasters (obviously) or boxes with hidden treasures.

“If I don’t have them, I don’t have to dust them. If the carpet looks like dirt, it won’t show the dirt,” Gran says.

Andrew likes to come to my house because it’s comfortable here and laid-back. Like Gran’s skin, everything is dull from age and faded from sun, and with brown spots, so no fuss. That is, except for her leather recliner in front of the TV (to put her feet up), and my shiny, black gaming system. When I moved in with Gran, she bought it for me. I don’t know if it was a pity gift, or just something that would keep me busy.

“Can you just play?” Andrew begs in a fed-up-with-my-chatter tone.

“How can I? We are becoming someone else…in real time. I mean, how can you not think about it?”

Andrew doesn’t respond. He has already eaten down to the popcorn duds at the bottom of the bowl. Andrew is sort of long and starved looking, all legs and ears, from his tofu diet. He is always hungry. His eyes are large and kind of liquid-y. I come up to his knobby knees. I’m a mix terrier to his large breed dog. He’s already so tall that at my height (five feet, three inches) I have to bend back my neck to look at his face in the clouds. Sometimes I make him stand just right so he blocks the sun, and it isn’t burning out my eyeballs.

“I don’t want to be anybody different from me or anybody at all,” he says with his hand in front of his full mouth. He hates people who talk with their mouth full of masticated mush.

“They should’ve let us pick. I want her because she knows stuff, like trendsetting, how-to with guys. She’s a fashionista. She has a website with followers, lots of them. What do you think it would be like, me as Stupendous Stella and then in three weeks going back to who I am? Will I be distraught?”

“Definitely. Come on, let’s just play.”

“Who will have to be me?” I ask as I put on my goggles again. Andrew doesn’t bite and lets the question hang as he follows me into the game. I swing my virtual sword and cut off the head of a goblin as it charges me from the castle hall. The goblin gone, I ask Andrew, “What happens if you get someone really weird?”

The trolls are upon us now. I move back-to-back with Andrew.

“I suppose too that if I got Stupendous Stella, I might be mocking myself. Shitnanigans. It’s a whole new level of self-torment. I mean, that could happen.”

As I hear myself saying the words. I feel stabbed through the heart. As if in stereo, a goblin sneaks up and slices me too. I’m virtually dead, again.

“If you aren’t going to pay attention, I’m not playing anymore.”

I strip off my goggles. I glance at my reflection in the front of them. I study my eagle eyes; zits that won’t go away no matter what products I use; a nose that is too big for my miniature face; a mouth that is too small for my liberal nose. “I really hate my small mouth. Gran says it’s her mouth, and that I should have picked my Aunt Lucy’s.” I make kissy lips.

Andrew rests his goggles above his gray eyes that have the long lashes I crave. “Would you just stop talking about it? I don’t want to think about it. Let’s just play so we can level up.”

I stick out my tongue at him and then pout. “How can we not? I mean it’s, like, so huge. It’s the-I-kid-you-not elephant in the room.”

“So you want to be the person that makes your life miserable.”

“She doesn’t make everyone’s life miserable. People like her. Anyway, I don’t want to be her. I just want to know how to be her. As they said, a whole new perspective.”

“Look, I like you and all your weird just fine, and this all is stupid, and I don’t want to do any of it.”

It’s true. Call me skeptoid, about the principal saying now that we’ve had five-sixths of a year of high school, have become older, more mature from our pre-teen and early teen behaviors, that this is a chance to integrate more fully, to be closer friends to each other, and kinder, see each other more clearly. Ha! Let’s see him do it.

The swapped genetic material decays over the three weeks and becomes waste. My genetic material could become waste in Stupendous Stella. God, that’s too much to think about. On the other hand, her genetic codes could become waste in me. Superb.

“What if I get brace girl, Alice Ochoa? They said that if the person you get has a wheelchair or something, you’ll have to use it. I’d have to come to school in that thingy she wears. I couldn’t bend at the waist or look down. I’d have to come to school in a tent. Absodefinitely not, I don’t know how she gets in and out of a car. She can hardly pick up a book from the ground. She walks around like she’s a shadow. No sir, thanks very much.”

“Be kind. It’s not Alice’s fault.”

“I know. I know. Arrrgghhh. I just don’t want to be worse off; you know? Just for the three weeks, I want to know what it's like to be socially advanced.”

“Alice is okay.”

“I know, but she needs something more. To be a successful brace girl, she needs more A-type genes. She needs to be a Connor Mackenzie. A joke for every reason, you know less…sensitive. She needs to use her personality to make her brace invisible to people. If genetics gives you lemons, it should also have to give you the personality to make lemonade.”

Genetic engineering couldn’t fix poor old Alice’s problem (a missing growth center on her spine because her mother drank or something). It also doesn’t fix personality traits like hate, greed, shyness. It’s too hard to fix flat feet, or oily skin, or pimples. To those who say it’s character building, I say booyah.

A horn outside honks three times, and then a pause, and then again.

“It’s your mom.”

Andrew and I eyeball each other. Fear freezes us both.

“How are we going to get through this tomorrow?” he blurts out. Andrew is not a blurter.

A sudden anxiety spike is making me feel like throwing up. Andrew has gone chalky.

“We have a pinky swear?” he asks.

“Of course. We pinky sweared. I will be there for you, and you will be there for me no matter who we become. We are best friends. Always. No mind melt will blow that out.”

Andrew picks up his coat and opens the door. “I don’t think I can do this.”

“Yes, you can, you will. Besides, with me as another person you might get to the next level.” I try to smile, but Andrew’s face is just breaking my heart.

I close the door. I inhale the scent of Gran’s living room, the bite of it from old, stuffed furniture, infrequently vacuumed carpets, winter snow-damp and spring mud, with cinnamon on top from all the rice puddings she bakes.

In my bedroom, I cocoon into my old, yellow blankie, with Zee Zee the zebra cuddled against my neck. We are becoming someone else. We don’t get to pick who we are, and we can’t take them off by raising our goggles. I think about tomorrow and wonder if I should be more choosy than usual about what to wear.

 

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